Lost love

by dustinl90   Aug 6, 2006


Im dieng from lost love,
and Im fading.
I try to swallow the pain.
Yet im still hurt and still crying.

I try to forget yet I dont want to.
Cause my heart is with you still.
I just dont want to let go of you.....

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  • 18 years ago

    by xXx3moBabe1507xXx

    I Love it...idk if it was short i still likes it...Hope U find that special someone

    =)

  • 18 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    A bit short but good i liked it but i would have liked it more if it was a bit longer and a bit more deep good job though :):):)
    will you look at my poems please thnx xxx alex xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥?♥

    I LIKED IT

  • 18 years ago

    by NothingGoldCanStay

    I liked it, Dustin.

    Im dieng from lost love,
    and Im fading.
    I try to swallow the pain.
    Yet im still hurt and still crying.

    That was lovely, but maybe it would be better if you made them longer. More enjoyable to read. Anywho...4/5 It's nice.

    xx.N-G-C-S.xx

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