by Choose xX Alex Xx Life Aug 6, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Beautiful boy why do you cry? |
by lOVER
I love how you put the third stanza(paragraph) |
by Holly
Wicked good job i liked it...the vocab was fine cept i spell all my words correctly too but it wasn't hard to read. Nice work though |
Wasn't to sure about the voab and that made it uneasy to read especially the repeatition. It felt sad to read really and personally I would change the words (boi-boy) but that could be me. Otherwise it was good. |