by Kyle Aug 6, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
The moment i layed eyes on you, |
Wow.. such a sad and poerful poem, i loved it,and it is soo true! i lvoed the 'moral' at the end, great write and keep it up... 5.5! please read and commen on my poems..tanks..Kirsty Palmer xx |
Poemd like this shouldnt be dissed and people shouldnt say how to improve. |