Like Footprints (Haiku)

by LadyPearl   Aug 6, 2006


Words left by poets
String past jars of waiting time
Scattered by handfuls

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  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    I'm not sure I understood this.. I'm sorry, it just didn't make sense with the title to me..

    xDarkSuicidex -No Rate- (I don't want to give you a 4 for something I didn't understand)

  • 18 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Ooo! Something I didin't expect...

    I liked the somewhat emotion in this, even though it was still REALLY short. Lol. Great job. 5/5 =) xoxo

    Samantha

  • 18 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    I love Haiku poems. Yours was very well done. I liked your wording choices, it made me go so far beyond what you wrote. The flow was good too along with the syllable count. Another great peice of poetry.

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Really nice Haiku Noni!..
    I kinda always thought Haiku was for nature poems. Hmm, could be wrong.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awww.. this was good! it was very interesting, used detailed words, and all the syllable counts worked.. nice job! 5/5

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