Comments : Like Footprints (Haiku)

  • 18 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Loved ive seen alot of poems like this lately it good would you scomment on some of my poems plz thnx xxx alex xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    Very different interpretation of poetrys legacy but a lovely image.
    Nicely done.

  • 18 years ago

    by Driver

    I really like this. good meaning, and not many can do haikus well that ive seen. you do them excellent.
    Driver

  • 18 years ago

    by John Bender

    Hey its me johnnyb123 from TPS check back in some of your older poems and i bet youll find my name hehe :) in the comments area that is

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awww.. this was good! it was very interesting, used detailed words, and all the syllable counts worked.. nice job! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Really nice Haiku Noni!..
    I kinda always thought Haiku was for nature poems. Hmm, could be wrong.

  • 18 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    I love Haiku poems. Yours was very well done. I liked your wording choices, it made me go so far beyond what you wrote. The flow was good too along with the syllable count. Another great peice of poetry.

  • 18 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Ooo! Something I didin't expect...

    I liked the somewhat emotion in this, even though it was still REALLY short. Lol. Great job. 5/5 =) xoxo

    Samantha

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    I'm not sure I understood this.. I'm sorry, it just didn't make sense with the title to me..

    xDarkSuicidex -No Rate- (I don't want to give you a 4 for something I didn't understand)