Strom

by Brittany Hampson   Aug 6, 2006


The lightening flashes,
the thunder roars....

All little kids are scared in their beds,
on the windows you can hear the rain pattering away....

the lighting flashes,
the thunder roars...

all is quite and all is still,
the only noise you hear is the pit-pattering of the rain, and the ROAR of the thunder....
the lighting stops,
the thunder does nothing...

all little kids are asleep soundly in
their beds

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tormented

    Hey!

    i liked this poem...you described it very well! i imagined it how you described it! very good indeed! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Poems like this shouldnt be dissed and people shouldnt say how to improve.

    Because its your poem and comes from the heart if someone else tells you what to write on it then it wouldnt be your poem would it if you know what i mean

    lovely poem though very detailed xx

    would you look at my poems please thnx xxx alex xxx

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