Broken Angels

by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex   Aug 6, 2006


These broken angels,
Were meant to fly,
Lost and lonely,
Angels weren't meant to cry.
Have you seen the tears,
Glorious pearls of light,
Running down battered faces,
These angels weren't mean to fight.
Looking at you,
With tear streaked faces,
Telling you of their story,
Of a forgotten grace.
Slaughtered and dead,
Cut at the wrist,
A dying angel whispered,
'It was God's kiss.'

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  • 18 years ago

    by DepthofPassion

    Very interesting...I loved it!

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    "With tear streaked faces,"
    [With 'a' tear streaked 'face']
    Only so it rhymes better...

    Seems like you have something for or against Angels to write about them so much. You mostly write of them being broken or dying. Which makes good imagery, but for some reason I just dislike that. I guess it's because I'm somewhat religious. Oh well, another interesting poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by -The-Undying-

    'It was God's kiss.'
    That was an amazing poem with a strong last line! Keep it up :P you should go pro

  • 18 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Aww. It's so deep with emotion. I loved it! Flow was excellent (more than I can say about most of my poems >.< ) Great write! 5/5 xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Kylie

    I really like this poem, good work. I look forward to reading your other poems.

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