Some really great imagery in this. It flows with real power although the final line for me left it a little flat. Good job as usual.

Wow, i must say this was excellent. flowed so smoothly and the entire poem connected so well. great job.
Driver

This poem is so deep full of deep words, you wrote it so nicely. great job

Good tale....i wnt to read it again...i mite l8ter on..hmmmmm

Congrats on a great piece. =D it was so poignant, and everything rhymed perfectly without seeming forced.
keep writing, u have such talent, and further potential
xxx

Ohh. I love love loooove dark poems. Your wording one tihs one was amazing. I absolutely am in love with this poem. I would have to say it is my favorite by far.

Ohh. I love love loooove dark poems. Your wording one tihs one was amazing. I absolutely am in love with this poem. I would have to say it is my favorite by far.

That was an amazing poem. at first i thought that you wre describing the fight between the devil(used to be an angel) and God. but then it wasnt but it was still a great poem!! the way you ended it wasnt all that great though. in my opinion you should never address yourself in a poem unless its about you and this poem wasnt. just my opinion though.

Ooooh, wow. This was really good. =D I loved the last stanza, I thought it was great.

You've got talent, and I hope you know that. This poem was awesome! Really well written. I don't think there's anything that needs or should be changed. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

A short, yet catchy poem. Great job

Glorious things would have [faught,]
^Fought^

Great write. =) I loved how short it was, but you managed to express yourself in its length. Something a lot of people can't do very well. Keep 'em coming! =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Omg thats so sad... angels shouldnt be compeating for Gods love...

Love this poem, truly amazing. I like all of it, its just a great poem.

Wings of an Angel

While your first stanza was really storng, and the imagery especially vivid, your second stanza falls a bit weak:
You'd never have thought,
Glorious things would have faught,
With these two above lines using the word you'd shatters the illusion reminding the reader that this is a poem for entertainment and that they are not locked in the poem's world during the time reading it.

"Blood of the Angel's fall from above."
[I would write "Blood of 'an' Angel's, fall from above" or "Blood of Angels fall from above" (the) didn't seem to fit with it]

"Yet as they did the Angel's fell,"
["the 'Angels' fell" It would be plural in this line]

Which ever works better for you. This was a really good poem, and I'm not quite sure why I missed it, but glad I read it. I know you've written better poetry, but to be better, you need to write poems like this that are used as stepping stones. So good job on this one.