Great poem! I can easily relate to it and I understand very well what you mean when you directly ask this.
Personally, I think you should change something,
When you say…
"What would you say if I told you SHE loveD you?...would you smile and say
I love YOU too?..."
--->>Wouldnt it be...
"What would you say if I told you (that) she loves you?...would you smile and say I love her too?..."

Anyway, amazing poem, very well done!
Best wishes,

TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

This is really great! yeah, i can relate also! keep it up:)

This poem touched me in a way not many poems do. This is because I can relate to the boy you describe in your poem. I have many of the same fears as he. Keep Up the great work my friend.

5/5