The Reflection

by Flying Phoenix   Aug 6, 2006


Black liquid crystal
The crisp line appears
Glistening with reflections
From the sunlight streaming
As the vivid colour is screaming
And pause
Sluggishly the mark turns matt
And is permanent
On the brilliant
Shining
Dazzling
Flawless paper
The nib bends down
Disrupting the surface of the
Faultless smooth
Lining of the abyss
Stand back and stare
Observe where the next point
Shall fall
Create the perfection
That depicts truly
The subject held before
Reflecting every image
Every emotion coursing through
Chaotic hues yet all in black
That perfect ink
Describing
Depicting
True Life

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  • 18 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    I think that was really good! I can only ever come up with a couple lines on this subject, never a whole poem. Great job!
    ~Jules

  • 18 years ago

    by Sophie

    Wow that was awesome
    i loved the vocab that u used it was very mature. well done it was written well.

    sophie:)

    p.s please comment or vote on some of mi poems :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Kirsty palmer

    Wow.. very creative, andvery deep, it had the power to captivate me! well written, it made evrything hectic in my life just stand still and calm whilst reading. your a true writter and have great talent! keep it up..please read and commen on my poems..thanks..Kirsty Palmer xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Life Is Beautiful

    That was really deep and descriptive...i really liked it

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