Good topic. I liked it. Although some of the lines in it ran way too long for the rest of the ones. It really brought out a meaning in life and how people discriminate other people just because of colour. 4/5 =) Keep it up! xoxo

Samantha

Its really emotional. its really good. so full of feeling. keep them up. xxx

I loved it.
The imagery was great and flow was flawless.

'Anger in people for no reason at all,
No one willing in this disgusting world to stand tall!
Have you a house? A roof over your head?
Would you rather be along the kids in Africa (the living dead).'

I loved it ^^
Keep it up 5/5

|Sarah|

Very good job, and it does kinda sounds like a song , 5/5