Across the miles

by goddess-glamourpuss   Aug 6, 2006


Although you're very far away
I'm sending you some smiles
I know that they will find you
Across a thousand miles

All the water that's between us
Is not an ocean but a pond
Through the day I wonder
With thoughts of you so fond

I'm really glad you chose me
To be a friend to you
And till the end of time
I promise to be true.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Candy

    Hello,
    I like your poem, its short but its also good it seems as if you have feelings for this person, keep up the good work xoxo Crystal

  • 18 years ago

    by Nelle

    Awww that was soo sweet..it made me smile, you should be proud not many things make me smile Lol...i loved this it was very cute! the flow and rhythm was perfect! great job! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Very cute.. a bit better than the other one, but I'm not sure I felt this one either. But nice rhyming.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Ooo! I love it! Even though it's short, it has lots of emotion. Something not many people can accomplish. Great job. I loved the flow, and the topic of the poem. The rhymes were well donw as well. Keep it up =) 5/5 xoxo

    Samantha

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa S. Masucci

    Very cute! My main complaint might be that it could be longer. I dunno. It's adorable though, I'd be honored if a friend wrote something like this about me.

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