by LadyPearl
Short, but very well written. I liked how you described distances in this poem. Keep it up |
This is a very well written poem! It flowed very smoothly, my fav staza is: |
Omg I really loved this poem...it was so beautiful. It was well written, had a good flow, great choice of words, and I loved the emotion and thought you put into it. Really an amazing poem. |
by Sourav
This is a wonderfully written poem. It flows well and to the point as well. Nice work! |
by Goran Rahim
Omg, it is really a sweet poem, as i can relate to 100 % |
Very cute! My main complaint might be that it could be longer. I dunno. It's adorable though, I'd be honored if a friend wrote something like this about me. |
Ooo! I love it! Even though it's short, it has lots of emotion. Something not many people can accomplish. Great job. I loved the flow, and the topic of the poem. The rhymes were well donw as well. Keep it up =) 5/5 xoxo |
Very cute.. a bit better than the other one, but I'm not sure I felt this one either. But nice rhyming. |
by Nelle
Awww that was soo sweet..it made me smile, you should be proud not many things make me smile Lol...i loved this it was very cute! the flow and rhythm was perfect! great job! 5/5 |
by Candy
Hello, |