Comments : Across the miles

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Short, but very well written. I liked how you described distances in this poem. Keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    This is a very well written poem! It flowed very smoothly, my fav staza is:

    Although you're very far away
    I'm sending you some smiles
    I know that they will find you
    Across a thousand miles

    5/5 awesome poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by SilenceBreaksTheHeart

    Omg I really loved this poem...it was so beautiful. It was well written, had a good flow, great choice of words, and I loved the emotion and thought you put into it. Really an amazing poem.

    Although you're very far away
    I'm sending you some smiles
    I know that they will find you
    Across a thousand miles

    That was my favorite stanza but I loved them all. I don't mind that the poem was short...I think if you had added much more it would have taken away from it. Really a sweet poem, and I can really relate to this. So Great job.
    5/5 for sure
    Breanna

  • 18 years ago

    by Sourav

    This is a wonderfully written poem. It flows well and to the point as well. Nice work!

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Omg, it is really a sweet poem, as i can relate to 100 %
    great job and great work done
    I really can relate this poem to my one called
    TO SEE YOUR BEAUTIFUL SMILE
    nice work done.
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa S. Masucci

    Very cute! My main complaint might be that it could be longer. I dunno. It's adorable though, I'd be honored if a friend wrote something like this about me.

  • 18 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Ooo! I love it! Even though it's short, it has lots of emotion. Something not many people can accomplish. Great job. I loved the flow, and the topic of the poem. The rhymes were well donw as well. Keep it up =) 5/5 xoxo

    Samantha

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Very cute.. a bit better than the other one, but I'm not sure I felt this one either. But nice rhyming.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by Nelle

    Awww that was soo sweet..it made me smile, you should be proud not many things make me smile Lol...i loved this it was very cute! the flow and rhythm was perfect! great job! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Candy

    Hello,
    I like your poem, its short but its also good it seems as if you have feelings for this person, keep up the good work xoxo Crystal