Freedom

by D   Aug 6, 2006


The time is now drawing near
of all the things that I most fear
the time has come to say goodbye
the time has come for me to die

A freedom from this endless pain
slowly driving me insane
tortured mind, bloodied dreams
for most of my life, or so it seems

Each day a struggle, it's all too much
no more will I smell,see or touch
it's better that it ends this way
at least for once I'll have a say

I'll take my own life, the easy way out
I don't know what all the fuss is about
I will be missed, but not for long
soon everything will carry on

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  • 18 years ago

    by Joyo

    I just can't stop wonder why you write so painful poems. Not that it is my buisness.. I just feel so sad and I really hope that you're going to be well.. if this is about you. If this comes from the very true you. take care, this was also a very good poem. "perfect" now exist. :). the words always seem to flow well. you're more than only good.. :). keep it up // from your fan "J"

  • 18 years ago

    by Kirsty palmer

    Wow.. well written, your very talented! i could feel all the emotions from this character.. it was really well written, and i was captured by it from when i first started reading... it flowed well! keep it up..5/5..please read and commen on my poems..thanks..Kirsty Palmer xx

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