Wow.. well written, your very talented! i could feel all the emotions from this character.. it was really well written, and i was captured by it from when i first started reading... it flowed well! keep it up..5/5..please read and commen on my poems..thanks..Kirsty Palmer xx

I just can't stop wonder why you write so painful poems. Not that it is my buisness.. I just feel so sad and I really hope that you're going to be well.. if this is about you. If this comes from the very true you. take care, this was also a very good poem. "perfect" now exist. :). the words always seem to flow well. you're more than only good.. :). keep it up // from your fan "J"