Comments : A poem for The One I love

  • 18 years ago

    by .::Lovely*Letdown::.

    You'll get your chance...promise...;) great poem loved it! 5/5

    --*--ScReAm YoUr HeArT OuT--*--

  • 18 years ago

    by VivVanilla

    A wee bit blushing now..thanks so much and wish me luck..

  • 18 years ago

    by VivVanilla

    Thanks again..

    Yup, you were right, it needs some changes..and I will..i am just so blind for my own texts, i need to forget them for a while and then come back to see my mistakes..

    And coz my english is not fluently at all..i might do funny mistakes :D But I am trying so hard..One day I will be better..I wish so.