Woah! This was mind blowing. Veryyy interesting to read. The way you described everything....just the way it was written. This was excellent. Def 5/5.

God bless,
-Poetess

Oh. Nice. I liked this peom the most though. I am a HUGE fan of Dark poems. Many people already know that though. This was so well written and your wording was amazing. It had great imagery. I enjoyed it. Lovely Write.