Great poem. the ending is really sad, but i really liked it overall. it was as if i was there witnessing it. good job.
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Loved this. It was very heartfelt and powerful. I felt like I was the speaker or persona of the poem, that is how much I can relate and how good your words are. Keep it up and take care. xxx

I TOTALLY know how that feels! I'm so sorry...and this poem was freaking AWESOME!! You portayed my feelings EXACTLY and you're an amazing writer! Keep it up! 5/5 :)

That is an amazing poem, i definitley know how you feel and im sorry you had to go through it. you did an amazing job though i could almost feel exactly what you felt but then again i have felt it. great job.