This was really sad, but it was very well written as well. it was as if i was there, good job. i liked it.
Driver

This will never be forgotten ....the tears people shed won't be forgotten either..I was only in 5th grade when it happened and remember it soooo well! Nice write...very sad!
-Krissey

Whoa. That was fantasic. I pretty much had a tear coming from my eyes. It just reminded me of my brother alot. It was so sad, yet so good. There's nothing I would change at all. Loved it. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

A very nice poem well written , and it will be always remeber as a great oem as it is history. great job as always

Tiz a beautiful poem. sad. but beautiful.
in my opinion some words could be rearanged, but not replaced, to give a more dramatic, heart felt, precense. but its still beautifuly writen. :)

PS. thanx for the comments :) if you have time would you mind doing "the chest" tiz the newest one

This is so beautiful! but sad...
It so well written...it created a picture in my mind so i could see what was happening...very great indeed!5/5

I really loved this one. The amount of emotion wasfantastic. Totally awesome 5/5 Loretta

How sad...
I am left in awe, because few poems manage to grab my utter attention, turn my heart inside out..
This one did. There is something so complicated, and at the end so simple about losing someone..

//T.L.//

The silence broken forever.

[My favorite lines]

Aww that's so sad... A nicely told story... I don't know what else to say, but very nicely written.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5