Broken Hearted

A notebook with the pages filled. Page by page he rips them out, all containing memories of her, good and bad. The only person he ever loved was this girl. He kept tearing at the pages, trying to let the feelings go, trying to forget the girl who just shattered his heart to pieces. Not too far away from that boy's home. Sits a girl, all alone. With music blaring and tears not heard. Her head is down, and her actions speak louder than words. Her hair falls down, all over her face, so messed up so misplaced. Unheard tears streaming down her face, as if they will never end. She understands that things will never be the same. She takes out her notebook and a pen. Starting to write of anything that comes to mind. She tries not to think about the boy...because the only pain worse then having your heart broken...is breaking your own...

i haven't written in a while and i know this is not a poem, but its the starting to a story I'm writing so id appreciate some feedback...thanks
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*Antisocial16*