You and me

by Zev   Aug 7, 2006


A kind, innocent, caring boy,
what came his way he didn't deserve.
He did what he could, anything that should of made her happy, yet nothing he did was up to her standards.
He hid the pain, and anger that was placed upon him.
He searched for the happiness he long wished for.
Unexpectedly, yet gratefully, you ended up coming back into his life.
This brought a faint smile to him, and a tiny glimpse of hope.
He was unsure of your intentions...if it was out of pity...of if the feelings were real.
He felt broken down, like if his heart exploded in his chest, but then you came and helped him pick up the shattered pieces.
This helped him realize you were here to stay and that your feelings were real.
This boy came to me and told me he had something to say, so here are his utmost honest, and deepest words to you:

"Thank you for being in my life in such a way.
Thank you for liking me for who i am.
Thank you for being the one that i am happy to go to anyone without a doubt and say ' I care about my girlfriend so much, and don't want to ever let her go'.
Thank you for being the one who eases my mind, even with the simplest of words.
Our futures lie ahead in time, whether or not what we have will last that long is up to us...but if it does, i want you to help me line the pieces of life up, YOURS and MINE."

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  • 17 years ago

    by XxXKristie MarieXxX

    Great Work! This one cought my eye right away. I love how you worded this. Nice job.

    DevilsAngel

  • 18 years ago

    by { The Jesster }

    I usually hate un-rhyming poetry and i almost hit the back button when I realised that yours didn't. But for some reason or other I didnt and I'm glad I read it. It is so good, with excellent descriptions. 5/5

    Jessie

  • 18 years ago

    by Meg

    Very good poem I really liked it good descriptions and wrighting excellent job 5/5