by Zev Aug 7, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
A kind, innocent, caring boy, |
Great Work! This one cought my eye right away. I love how you worded this. Nice job. |
I usually hate un-rhyming poetry and i almost hit the back button when I realised that yours didn't. But for some reason or other I didnt and I'm glad I read it. It is so good, with excellent descriptions. 5/5 |
by Meg
Very good poem I really liked it good descriptions and wrighting excellent job 5/5 |