Comments : Don't Cry Little Girl

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I liked this very much.

  • 18 years ago

    by Hillary

    Hey! AWESOME poem.. you wrote a comment on mine.. "behinde these eyes" and yours did give me some hope that things will turn around.. thanx...

    keep writing! its GREAT!
    =D

  • 18 years ago

    by Destinys Pain

    OMGSH! I LOVED THIS SOOOOO MUCH!!! you are an awesome writer!! u know, this could make an awesome song too. u should think about it. keep writing!

  • Its beautiful but i've been looking up your poems and their all beautiful cuz they're more then just words thrown together.

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Awwwwww i love this, 5/5. awww hun!! xxxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    Wow!! i loved this one! it was amazingg.

    Don't cry little girl, you're not alone.
    I know what it's like to be unknown.
    And don't cut those pretty little wrists.
    Cause they say that happiness does exist.
    And I'm not sure if we're meant to do more,
    Just spread your wings, and I promise you'll soar

    that stanza really caught my eye, i loved it the most. keep up the lovely work!