Gummy Bear --
This was the best poem I`ve read from you. The only adivce I have is to seperate your stanzas (it makes it WAY easier for the reader to comprehend) and just touch up the flow a bit. Some of your lines ran too long. But its not too bad ;; I would definitely seperate your stanzas. Great job, 5/5. I`ll do a couple more of your poems. =D

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood

Beautiful couldnt have said it beta myself
5/5