I read this once and gather that it's about the personification of nature, which you're so good at. I'd break this up into stanzas maybe, and also like the last poem, get rid of unnecessary punctuation. I think the lack of stanzas works to your credit a lot but in this particular one, (repeating myself) it may be more effective to break it up and allow each stanza to sink in.

You are the only person who keeps me thinking with your poems on a constinate basis. I like that. You throw in something to get you off track and make you read until you understand it. Great job. 5/5
-Kakashi