by Megann Lee Aug 7, 2006
category :
Life, society /
about society
You'd never know what the words and rumors you speak of will do. Of how you point, laugh and tease, of every ounce of fat I have. |
Yet again, a nice story you told.. I've felt like this many of times. |
by Mousie
It wasn't as good as your others, but it definitely hits hard, i'll give you that... it shows what ppl can do to others, and i commend you for putting this out there... nice job keep up the good work |
by holly
Nice i liked the way you expressedf yourself in this. great content xxALLYxx |
Very nice. I think you did a great job, but maybe should think a little bit about structure. I did really like the content.4/5 Loretta |
by Natalie
Excellent ending in this! Was really powerful. Such a sad poem, too. Hope none of this is based on anything to do with you. It was written wonderfuly. Keep it up! 5/5 |