I'm sorry those people drove you to that, but thank you for your comment I think I need as much help as possible, I have a dream with ym future with poetry
Thanks!

Excellent ending in this! Was really powerful. Such a sad poem, too. Hope none of this is based on anything to do with you. It was written wonderfuly. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Very nice. I think you did a great job, but maybe should think a little bit about structure. I did really like the content.4/5 Loretta

Nice i liked the way you expressedf yourself in this. great content xxALLYxx

It wasn't as good as your others, but it definitely hits hard, i'll give you that... it shows what ppl can do to others, and i commend you for putting this out there... nice job keep up the good work

Yet again, a nice story you told.. I've felt like this many of times.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5