What is this..

by gabrielle.Xx   Aug 7, 2006


What is this i feel.
what is this inside..
it sometimes hurts..
i sometimes cry..
if it was love..
would it hurt this bad..
what is this feeling..
why am i sad..
i thought it was love..
but maybe its not..
oh how would i know..
how can i stop?..
you were my first love..
and most likely my last..
this feeling is deathly..
this feelings my last..
im taking my life..
you drove me to this..
all those lies and promises..
that last broken kiss..
take this girls mind..
mould it in shape..
make her able to handle you..
to handle all your mistakes..
im not saying im prefect..
bu neither are you..
so skrew your fake apology..
im getting over you!!

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  • 18 years ago

    by *unpredictable*

    Ooooh... it's rly good!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Amy

    Great poem!
    loved it....

  • 18 years ago

    by *shae-natasha*

    It was pretty good but the ending would be better if she took her life! or even better then that you dont mention her wanting to kill herself, and she could get over him. itd be much better. its kinda what girls need! a know? to read poems about getting over guys, cuz we gotta do that alot cuz guys break our delicate hearts! :(
    but anyway, it was ok, i enjoyed it, just those few things...
    love from shae-natsha gilliland

    xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Lezza

    I love this, absolutly love it!

    keep it up, very good, very very good.

    i enjoyed it all. xx

  • 18 years ago

    by ~Steph~

    Omg! i loved it , for real!! especially this part!! I even got goosebumps:
    make her able to handle you..
    to handle all your mistakes..
    im not saying im prefect..
    bu neither are you..
    ---i just submitted a new poem, u should check it out and lemme kno what u think--im new at this stuff, lol

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