by Just Lucy Aug 7, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
Luke you were incredible |
by Jessica
Aw, you poor porr thing.. We're all here for you okay hunny? This flowed well, used great descriptions that helped us understand everything that happened, and the emotion was oozing from every line.. Great job! 5/5 |
So...did this happen a long time ago or what? |
I Also Liked The Part That Kristen Mentioned... I Can Almost Feel Your Pain Because You Explained Everything So Clearly.. |
This is a very sad poem I love the deep message that love has no boundries I am sorry for your loss |
by Oscar
Aww this was real sad. i'm sorry for your loss. you must be real strong to write a poem about it. it was really good too. |