Choking and smoking

by xX-jess-Xx   Aug 7, 2006


I'm choking and smoking,
to your angelic soul.
I'm choking and smoking,
myself into a hole.

Where the only way out,
is to sleep and to dream.
To cry out your name,
To whisper and scream.

*not finished! can u comment on what you think so far please?!*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    It sounds great so far. The beginnig is straight to the point. 5/5
    -Kakashi

  • 18 years ago

    by Aussie

    Gr8 poem...small but says alot. keep writing:)

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