This is a really sweet poem. Very melancholy. I like it.

I hope to read more by you soon.

~Scarlett

This is a good poem. The ending was very good.
I also like the line: "We danced apon a rainbow and chased the clouds away"
I also liked how you would have a line of something and then the next line silence...
It was a very clever poem, and very sad.
keep writing
peace
soffe

Such a sweet and emotion poem. Well written, 5/5. Em