Comments : The Angels

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenie

    Wow!!!!! new topic and an amazing poem!!! wow! loved it sis! amazing! truly talent in these words!
    "She told me that every little girl
    Has an Angel on her shoulder
    The Angel will protect you and
    Guide you through as you grow older"
    i belive u r my angel :D thank u!!
    ps..
    in the poem u commented about freinds and family...u were def one of the people who inspired me to write it, THANK U SIS!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephy

    Wow Thats Really Good....I Love it!
    -xxxx-

  • 18 years ago

    by Deana

    Angel [I like that name for you]
    you are an amazing writer. This poem is very beautiful. I`m anxious to read all of your others. I like joking with you too in beneath guiding lights that really cool club! luv ya!

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Ah hun that is so reassuring. I love it so much. Thanku so much for ur sweet comment. Hopefully i get around to emailing you soon.
    I'm feeling a little bit better now.. i just need to calm down a bit and breathe. Thanks so much
    Love you lots xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Hayley

    This is a beautifull poem hun! i love reading your work! it always makes me feel soo idk happy to hear from you! your poems are amazing awaiting more work from ya! love ya and miss ya
    -hayley

  • 18 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    I lik this 1 its a nice poem......

  • 18 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Oh my gosh! I LOVE it! It's cute, but has a point. I love the idea of the angels bowling when it's stormy outside =P The flow was very good, and the rhymes were very well chosen out. 5/5 =) xoxo

    Samantha

  • 18 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Cute. My Mother used to tell me the same thing, yet I'm still terrified of the storms. Anyway, I liked this peice of work. Good Job.

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Very cute, child-like poem. Nicely told.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    This is so beautiful...so spiritual and refreshing. Wonderful write, I must say myself, you write to perfection!