Love Masquerade

by Mousie   Aug 7, 2006


His words flow through me
Like a warm ocean breeze,
Full of relaxation and harmony
High on love and passion.

His smile shines through me
Like rays from the sun,
A warmth that cannot be explained
Complete with pure happiness.

His compassion comforts me
Like a warm cup of cocoa on a cold winter's night,
A feeling of comfort and love
Brought forth by no other.

His safe, loving embrace
Like that of a guardian angel,
Protecting me from life's consequences
And holding me when at my worst.

This love is like no other
One of innocence and truth,
A feeling of everlasting joy
Complete with an absolute friendship.

the title is a play on words... i'm showing, using the similes, how love is disguised in real life... hope you get that reference! comment and rate as you like please!

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  • 18 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Wonderful poem! I liked the emotion and depth you put towards it! Nicely done!

  • 18 years ago

    by Megan

    I really liked how you explained it at the end b/c of the ameture i am i didnt get it until i read that i really like this poem to b/c your right some of the true love is arond you just hidden in this messed up world. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, a very sweet love poem with deep words u expresed ur feelings with, so greatly done.

  • 18 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Wow wonderful poem. I really enjoyed reading it. Great work Hun.

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    I really like this. It was very sweet and sounds well thought out. You did a great job on this and I loved it from beginning to end. The flow and rhythm of it was really good and held up well and it was overall a great poem. 5/5 Keep it up!