I liked this, I liked the relaxing works you used it made a gentle love. I liked the symbolism you used comparing sincere love and friendship to wonderous things.
The only thing that bothered me was how you said his smile"cuts" through you like the sun. "Cut," to me isn't a lovey word and I think you could say that line better by changing that word.
Thanks for sharing.

I really like this. It was very sweet and sounds well thought out. You did a great job on this and I loved it from beginning to end. The flow and rhythm of it was really good and held up well and it was overall a great poem. 5/5 Keep it up!

Wow wonderful poem. I really enjoyed reading it. Great work Hun.

Wow, a very sweet love poem with deep words u expresed ur feelings with, so greatly done.

I really liked how you explained it at the end b/c of the ameture i am i didnt get it until i read that i really like this poem to b/c your right some of the true love is arond you just hidden in this messed up world. 5/5

Wonderful poem! I liked the emotion and depth you put towards it! Nicely done!