Very good. i liked it. it was kinda sad *sighs* but i liked it nonetheless. keep writing! :)

~~Spanish367

I really loved this...I can really relate to your work...this was beautiful. It was well written, had a good flow, great chice of words, and I liked the rhyme scheme...Great job, loved it.
Thank you for the comment...I really appreciate it.
5.5
Breanna