Comments : Light My Way To Your Heart

  • 20 years ago

    by craig

    hey mchelle! its 3.30 in the morning here, jus woke up.id left pc on so i thought id check email. that `bloody pi*sing me off`one ive just seen had me laughing for ages and im still sniggering as i write, i hear that almost everyday off of everyone,would love to hear you say it with yr accent. sent you email earlier, hope your getting them, thats so sweet of you to write me a poem, so touching.i WILL write one about you soon, try cut and paste when you log poems in, thats what i do after many frustrating attemps to quickly write it in, i emailed the host and he said that u have 15mins to write else it logs u off.
    yr poem here michelle is so sooo sad. very lonely, almost a loving but loveless soul watching her life go by, and added to what you said in email earlier bout yr parents long marrige, a longing to be secure in a happy loving relationship. wondering if it will ever happen. is it just something that happens to everyone else or just in films. something i feel myself on many an occasion.i think everyone except the happily married can relate to this poem, and since most people arnt happily married this piece has a universal appeal. dont know if this is making any sense michelle, im sleepy headed and looking longingly at my pillow. just thought id make contact incase my emails not gettin through, going now. `bloody pi*sing me off.` thats still tickling me. xxx

  • 20 years ago

    by lawrence

    heartwrenching... "i feel i'm just going through the motions, as if my soul has been sedated...". i hope u have found that someone. i'm still searching...

  • 20 years ago

    by J Avery Johnson


    N.E.thing less than a 5 would be a pure and utter insult. Again u'r work has touched me. 4give me if I relay this poem 2 the "LOVE OF MY LIFE", she'll love it.

  • 20 years ago

    by Michelle

    Lawrence reading back through some old poems here and in case you ever pop back...have found that someone and sooooo soo happy..and so will you..and JUST like they say!! When you LEAST expect it!!! :) Luv Michelle