Undesirable visions in my head
Nightmares crawling through my brain
Ravenous ghouls on attach
Anger and hate fight back
Veiled thoughts of suicide
Everyone wants a piece of me
Loquacious voices gently murmuring
Every night brings sorrow and pain
Dawn's rays drive them away
Loretta --
Oooh, wow. Please, love, tell me this is fictional?
If not, you`re iNCREDiBLY convincing!! I think you did a terrific job on this, though I think you may be more comfortable writing more positive writes. But overall, you did a terrific job. 5/5, as usual. =D