That Cannot Be Erased

by loretta Taylor   Aug 7, 2006


That Cannot Be Erased

You made me feel wanted
Your kisses made me sigh

My lonely heart pounded
When you held me tight

You touched and caressed me
Making me feel alive

You enslaved me
With your beautiful smile

Your smoldering eyes
Made me melt inside

Your loving words
Made me feel real

Your love for me
Made me fly so high

All those feeling
Now make me cry

You were a liar
Your attention a fraud

I want to hate you
But find I cannot

My crying heart
Clings to happy times

You were the love of my life
And that cannot be erased

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  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha Hollywood

    Loretta --
    I think you did a pretty good job on this. The flow, grammar, and spelling were all absolutely flawless. That`s definitely good. The theme seemed a little vague at first, but once I re-read it, it was all pretty clear. You did a great job, keep it up!
    5/5

    Love Much,
    Samantha Hollywood

  • 18 years ago

    by Bill Turner

    Beautifully done. I am not usually fan of this format, but this one had me all the way. Great job.

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