I skipped a couple words the first time I read it and confused myself, but after reading it a second time..I really liked it..shows that some people will do anything for live even if it means dieing for them or with the person you care for...Great poem...glad to see your writing again, you have a different style then most of the poets on the site and its a great change to read something as good as this!
Keep it up as always
-Krissey

The flow was alright and the poem was different. I'd give you a 4.8 on originaliy but the word choice itself would probably be a 4.6. Maybe if you'd gone deeper into the descriptions or emotionally so weas readers could feel it over us it would be easier to pick something out of this to sort of relate to.

It was hard to understand what this was suppose to be about but I loved it 5/5! Great poem

Aw, This is so sad. =( It was good though, it flowed really well, and I liked the rhyming you had in this! But it's just a sad poem, tehe. Hope you're okay. *hugs* Awesome job, hun. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Well written, but very chilling.Its a wonderful poem, but sometimes I think poetry like this gives young ones bad ideas when they are depressed. Just a thought 5/5

I loved it..it's flow was alright.You could've gotten more descriptive but it's not that bad as is.Anyway,it was really sad but i loved every bit of it.Very nice poem,it was a pleasure reading it.
5/5

-Russell-

After i read it, it gave me a sense of truth and happiness and overall i think thats what a poem should do
not what words you used or how you said it(as kaylee responded) but how it came across
good job

Awww..that was so cute nellee! it was really sad too though.. i loved it! the descriptions were beautiful and detailed.. the flow was good, and it was fulll of emotion! 5/5

What a wonderful poem. It is adorable, but yet sad at the same time. Good job on writing :). Good luck with your poems ahead :)

Awwwwwwwww.........i lik this 1 but its really sad though.....live and die together....hmmmm....i would die for some1 i luv..... 5/5 for me!!

Omg this is really deep, i thought it was really affective too. Love can do so many things. As you might say love never dies within.
10/10 EXCELENT!!

Beautifully written.
good flow
very cute

WOw that was great it sorta brought a tear to my eye well great job!! keep up the good work i am looking forward to reading somemore of your pomes
-sidney

Very well said!

This was really sweet.....two people died so they could stay together

I really like it

Very good

I think all i can say to this poem is

WOW!

i felt the emtion in it and thats great for writing. good job!

Very powerful. Chilling, yet beautifully sad. I loved it.

Thats good thanks for giveing us the chance to read it