by Drew Gold Aug 7, 2006
category :
Life, society /
about society
And what a world |
by Lenny
*writes text review on poem* Yeah no crits! I love the ending, and the occasional use of rhyme. Beautiful! |
by Mustardhart
Wow, this is kool job man. Keep writing. |
by Midnight Sun
Holy crap! This was totally awesome... I was VERY rapped up in the entire thing...GREAT JOB! 5/5! |
by Lenny
Oooohhh I liked that. such vivid language, mmmm a joy to read, the description was just so rich. I love it, its so dark and the flow is mmmmm! No crits sorry... Man I suck at crits... |