by Tormented Aug 7, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Till the sun stops shining |
Very nice poem to, see you rhymed there .. good job i giveya a 5 |
by BlAcK RoSe
I like this alot needs abit more emotion keep writing chick |
by Nee
Aw, I love the ending of this poem |
by C Cattaway
Beautiful. To love that much is a truly amazing thing, and you have captured it wonderfully. Well done. xx |
by LadyPearl
Very sweet poem. Usually I don't repetitive lines, but you applied it well |