by kyliecat009
NICE! |
by Megann Lee
Awh, this is beautiful. I really loved it and the wording structure of it all. Amazing. Great job. |
by Megan
Hey |
I love your repitition, |
by Tammi
I love this poem I feel the deep love here and the wording is great. 5/5 |
by Robie Lincer
Awsome! loved your poem alot! it shows your love is real and everything is pure! |
by Sourav
I liked the last stanza very much... Very well written... Good work. |
by blueknight
You capture kristen attention great job |
Awwwwwwwwwwwww........this 1 is really sweet.....awsome!! keep on writing!! 5/5 for me |
by Bridgette
Awww... I love this poem. I just absolutely 100% love this poem. I usually don't like repetition, but this one worked so well and it was so sweet and filled with so much emotion. My favorite stanza was probably: |
by Natalie
This was pretty different to most love poems I read. At first when I glanced at it, I noticed all the repeating bits, and I was thinking it wasn't gonna turn out that good, but after reading it, I was amazed. You've done a really good job on this. Beautiful job, indeed. 5/5 ..And sorry for the late comment, I had to go away for a day or two. =) |
by Lisa
Nice poem. |
by LadyPearl
Very sweet poem. Usually I don't repetitive lines, but you applied it well |
by C Cattaway
Beautiful. To love that much is a truly amazing thing, and you have captured it wonderfully. Well done. xx |
by Nee
Aw, I love the ending of this poem |
by BlAcK RoSe
I like this alot needs abit more emotion keep writing chick |
Very nice poem to, see you rhymed there .. good job i giveya a 5 |