Comments : I Will Love You Till...

  • 18 years ago

    by kyliecat009

    NICE!

  • 18 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Awh, this is beautiful. I really loved it and the wording structure of it all. Amazing. Great job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Megan

    Hey
    This wuz great...it has so much meaning behind it...i luv it...
    an thanx so much for the comments...ur already on my fav list cuz i luv ur stuff...everytin i've read has been great...ur a great writer...dont ever stop writen...

  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    I love your repitition,
    some Poets
    would down-vote this
    because of its repitition
    but repitition is a part of poetry
    Great Job
    I loved it
    It was beautifully written
    WonderfuL message
    explaining The love
    all around
    amazing job
    keep it up
    5/5
    ~MF~

  • 18 years ago

    by Tammi

    I love this poem I feel the deep love here and the wording is great. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Awsome! loved your poem alot! it shows your love is real and everything is pure!

    5/5 keep it up

    Thanks for the comment on my poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by Sourav

    I liked the last stanza very much... Very well written... Good work.

  • 18 years ago

    by blueknight

    You capture kristen attention great job

  • 18 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Awwwwwwwwwwwww........this 1 is really sweet.....awsome!! keep on writing!! 5/5 for me

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Awww... I love this poem. I just absolutely 100% love this poem. I usually don't like repetition, but this one worked so well and it was so sweet and filled with so much emotion. My favorite stanza was probably:
    Till these feelings vanish
    Till these thoughts disappear
    Till the numbers end
    I will love you
    That one really stood out to me. Great job on this! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    This was pretty different to most love poems I read. At first when I glanced at it, I noticed all the repeating bits, and I was thinking it wasn't gonna turn out that good, but after reading it, I was amazed. You've done a really good job on this. Beautiful job, indeed. 5/5 ..And sorry for the late comment, I had to go away for a day or two. =)

    Natalie``

  • 18 years ago

    by Lisa

    Nice poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Very sweet poem. Usually I don't repetitive lines, but you applied it well

  • 18 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    Beautiful. To love that much is a truly amazing thing, and you have captured it wonderfully. Well done. xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Nee

    Aw, I love the ending of this poem
    very sweet, @ first I didnt want to read it but when I read comments I was like"No I will" =-D

    keeo it up
    xxxxxxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by BlAcK RoSe

    I like this alot needs abit more emotion keep writing chick
    thanks

    can u comment on some more ta thanks

  • 17 years ago

    by LiveTogetherDieAlone

    Very nice poem to, see you rhymed there .. good job i giveya a 5