by Ashes of a Black Rose aka Night Child Aug 7, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Father i've sinned |
Nicely written again, with tons of emotion...But you repeated yourself a bit too much for my likings and it sounded a lot like your other poem. |
Yeah. |
by Mousie
Nice job, i think this was my favorite actually... it was different, i really enjoyed it... keep it up 5/5 |