Can you kill me....
by The Lonely Rose Aug 7, 2006
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Can you kill me here * gives you the gun* |
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18 years ago
by Natalie
Awe! I hope this isn't true. It's so sad. You conveyed your emotions well though. If you ever need someone to talk to, Just private message me, okay?
Keep up the great work!
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18 years ago
by Mommy And Me
Again this has got potencial, I was pulled into the poem right away but when i reached the line
i know how I'm going to die anyways... anyways threw off the rythem.
read it with out anyways and see if you like it better. i believe it will pull the poem together more. -
18 years ago
by Bridgette
Aww.. this is such a sad poem! I hope that you don't really feel this way! But you did an amazing job on this! It's filled with so much emotion. 5/5
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18 years ago
by Tiffany
I adore this poem. What I recognize most about it, is that it has some of the same characteristics my writings once held. Pain, misery, grief. As I read it, the memories of knife against skin come rushing back to mind. Even though it may seem like the pain of what you are facing may never fade, things get better with time.
You deserve to live, you deserve to be loved. Never forget that. -
18 years ago
by gabrielle.Xx
Thats a cool poem.. very deep and heartfilled!! X please chek out my poems X
