That was some deep stuff!! I like it though. I love it.

Thats sad... it really is.. but dont kill urself.. i kno wut ur goin thru. ur confused about eveyrhting and stuff. yea i have been thru that and eveyrthing.heck im still trying to go thru it. so i have some of hte same problems u do. but ne ways i relaly like htis poem. its very strong emotional and veyr deep. keep on writing u have talent
if u ever wana talk im here u can email me
take care
luve angie

Thats a cool poem.. very deep and heartfilled!! X please chek out my poems X

I adore this poem. What I recognize most about it, is that it has some of the same characteristics my writings once held. Pain, misery, grief. As I read it, the memories of knife against skin come rushing back to mind. Even though it may seem like the pain of what you are facing may never fade, things get better with time.

You deserve to live, you deserve to be loved. Never forget that.

Aww.. this is such a sad poem! I hope that you don't really feel this way! But you did an amazing job on this! It's filled with so much emotion. 5/5

Again this has got potencial, I was pulled into the poem right away but when i reached the line

i know how I'm going to die anyways... anyways threw off the rythem.
read it with out anyways and see if you like it better. i believe it will pull the poem together more.

Awe! I hope this isn't true. It's so sad. You conveyed your emotions well though. If you ever need someone to talk to, Just private message me, okay?

Keep up the great work!

Natalie``