Comments : Wings To Fly

  • 17 years ago

    by Jen

    Awww i liked that poem, it had a good flow to it and the subject was also good, loved it!
    5/5 =]
    ~*~Jen~*~

  • 17 years ago

    by linderrrxo

    I really liked this poem good jog you are a very good writer and keep uo love always linda 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Naerwen

    Many can appreciate and associate with this piece... it rings true within me from when I was younger. There is a honesty that shines through, perhaps because of the simple structure and wording. It is a very effect and saddening write, I enjoyed reading and reacting to it. It stirs memories aswell as pluck heartstrings... stay strong my dear, the saddeness will fade.

    Best wishes.

  • 16 years ago

    by Faithless Watermelon

    Certainly not bad at all, but i gotta give it a 4 cuz of some minor mistakes ("noone" is two words, and after "they're all big stars" there should be an "and" instead of but)

  • I love this i feel the same way

  • 16 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    So sad but Gorgeous ..
    She looks up at all the posters on the wall
    They're all big stars, and she feels so small
    I liked those the most...keep it up5/5