by Jen
Awww i liked that poem, it had a good flow to it and the subject was also good, loved it! |
by linderrrxo
I really liked this poem good jog you are a very good writer and keep uo love always linda 5/5 |
by Naerwen
Many can appreciate and associate with this piece... it rings true within me from when I was younger. There is a honesty that shines through, perhaps because of the simple structure and wording. It is a very effect and saddening write, I enjoyed reading and reacting to it. It stirs memories aswell as pluck heartstrings... stay strong my dear, the saddeness will fade. |
Certainly not bad at all, but i gotta give it a 4 cuz of some minor mistakes ("noone" is two words, and after "they're all big stars" there should be an "and" instead of but) |
I love this i feel the same way |
So sad but Gorgeous .. |