Sorrow

by ~Fallen~   Aug 7, 2006


Sorrow and loneliness,
A faint cry in the darkness.

A child that is lost,
A terrible cost.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Chelsea Sprite

    Very good. Kinda short, but that's good too, I guess. :) You did good! Keep writing!

    ~~Spanish367

  • 18 years ago

    by ~Fallen~

    Thanx for the comment and 4 the critisim it all helps..lol...o and they reason its so short is bc its a couplet

  • 18 years ago

    by X~Angie~X

    This is pretty good. i like it. but for a lil bit of critisim i think you should make the lines a little bit longer.. but thats all up to u. i ilke it tho. even tho its short. keep up the good poems
    take care
    luve angie

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