Wow!! this is AWESOME! the flow was and the rhyme were great and i liked your choice of words! the ending was beautiful! i cant say much to describe how good this poem is!5/5

Awh. That's sad. I really loved the creativity of this poem. It was sad, but I liked it. The flow went really well with it. Keep up to great work.

Ooo! Great poem! I loved it! It was so...familyish lol. Some things in it, my family would never go and do. Too many things happening to do anything out of the ordinary. But great write! It flowed well, and it was...good! Lol. 5/5 =) xoxo

Samantha