well agree with above, and I like the poem, gave it a five..what I didn't appreciate was your comment on my good friend Craigs poem about the insane madman...you know, not everyone writes from experience!!! I mean, should I judge you through this poem..maybe it was just a poem..I guess not, but...Craig is far froma deranged killer..really a nice guy..and just because he chooses to stretch his abilities and write things like that does not make him any less so..did you happen to read any of his other ones..or his love poems??? I mean come on..I don't mean to be rude here in your comments section, butyou were pretty rude in his..you're a good writer, keep writing..just get to know someone before you trash them or judge them in their OWN comments...take care...Michelle

poem wise, it is good! but AJ, hope u did more than just write her a poem...