Hell

by gabrielle.Xx   Aug 8, 2006


Once i begin to cry,
make me bleed,
pull the trigger,
listen to my scream,
my sorrows gone,
i make my way
to the light
finally
the fire around me burns
in this empty jail cell
this is not heaven
no more then hell
those empty whispers
spreading lies
words pacing back and fourth
conversation in disguise.
poison me
part my lips
once and at last
kiss me my last kiss...

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  • 18 years ago

    by enfant du tordu chagrin

    Wow, a passionate and eloquent piece, well written, and a truly enjoyable read. Great Work!

    Yours Sincerely
    Drew

  • 18 years ago

    by Phantasmagoria

    I very much like the lines about heaven and hell

  • 18 years ago

    by gummy_bear_exocutionist

    Wow, it was really impressive, im adding you into my favorites.

  • 18 years ago

    by Ryko

    I can see you thought about your feelings before writing them down. The ending reminds me of romeo and juliet..which is about all I can remember of Shakespeare because I barely understand a word he writes...Im not much of a reader haha...but yeah good poem!

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