I can see you thought about your feelings before writing them down. The ending reminds me of romeo and juliet..which is about all I can remember of Shakespeare because I barely understand a word he writes...Im not much of a reader haha...but yeah good poem!

Wow, it was really impressive, im adding you into my favorites.

I very much like the lines about heaven and hell

Wow, a passionate and eloquent piece, well written, and a truly enjoyable read. Great Work!

Yours Sincerely
Drew